I like it. Great rhythm. Two things: 1. Try and get that rhythm to loop, well. By that I mean find a good way to tie the faster rhythm back into the slow one so that it sounds intelligible.
2. I'd really like to hear the music that would go with it. If you can give me a thematic idea(like desert, dramatic, port town, ect) I can try and mess with it too.
But yeah, that rhythm is very battle-like indeed.