Since you've added more, I'll just add a spice of criticism. ^_^
@Tohno Shiki (without the glasses): I just think that the eyes need to be toned down a bit, they're too bright.
@Nrvnqsr Chaos: More contrast on the coat, a bit saturated.
@Alucard: I just think you have too much contrast on the coat, the dark outline is visible through the red.