i've read the story, and already played the first version of rakenzarn.. both are pretty good in terms on character personality development and the story narrations.
despite being a completely mixed up character's that usually can lead to a disasterous result of a story, it managed to keep the balance of each character personality that make's them not completely out of character.
cry of the forbidden one's is an old fic no? despite there's not having any continuation, it still intrigues me to keep watch of the story
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If there will be the next mytery novel games like Cry of the forbidden ones, i completely go for it!