Lol, no, winkio. I value your opinion and you are actually completely right with every single thing that you are saying. It's just that I'm on a deadline and I spent a lot of time trying to make those vocals work somehow. They are well recorded, but completely arrhythmic. I basically saw it that I had to build a song around those vocals and the main melody. I basically threw out most complex ideas out of the window since I wanted it to be a remix and not too different from original song. I still wanted some variation around so I put in some stuff here and there which sounds good, but that's only patching instead of fixing the problem at the core.
Today is a new day. Listening to the song right now, after sleeping it over, I can hear the repetition a lot better and the parts that are stretching out unnecessarily. I wanted to keep some of the "charm" of the original, but I didn't do it too well. I've worked all day yesterday on it and I seriously couldn't recognize any general repetition, because everything was repetitive to me yesterday. That always happens so I didn't think too much about it. I have 36 hours left before I have to submit the song. I will try to do a couple of things to the song today to see if I can change some things and make it sound better and less repetitive. One of the cores of the repetition is the beat and the simple melodies I used without variation. In other songs I fix these things by turning off stuff here and there and it sounds less repetitive, but in this one I wasn't able to it smoothly.