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Started by magic2345, July 05, 2008, 01:53:06 am

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magic2345

I tried my hands at coloring a drawing.



What do you think? Critiques and comments please. (Aside the fact that some of the colors of the jacket is weird)
"The world is not beautiful, therefore it is." -Kino's Journey

"Hm...What would uncle say?....
Life is like the clouds, it has two sides and a silverlining inbetween...Like a sandwich!! When life is hard, you take a bite out of the silverlining...."
-Zuko
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Game I'm currently working on:
Terra Eternity
Story : 1%
Characters : 3%
Mapping : 1%
Graphics : 3%
Scripts : 20%

Calintz


magic2345

REALLY?? Thanks! I thought it was messy.
"The world is not beautiful, therefore it is." -Kino's Journey

"Hm...What would uncle say?....
Life is like the clouds, it has two sides and a silverlining inbetween...Like a sandwich!! When life is hard, you take a bite out of the silverlining...."
-Zuko
_________________________________
Game I'm currently working on:
Terra Eternity
Story : 1%
Characters : 3%
Mapping : 1%
Graphics : 3%
Scripts : 20%

Calintz

July 05, 2008, 04:32:20 am #3 Last Edit: July 05, 2008, 04:37:09 am by Calintz16438
Well it is, but your particular style looks good that way. At least to me.

Problems:
- No light effects on the shirt.
- No shading on the shirt.
- Minimal shading in hair.
- Red shirt is barely showing. It needs to be darker. Needs shade.

The choice of colors don't "excite" me, but they are ok. Better color cooperation(contrast) could improve this piece.

EDIT:
Do you use Photoshop to color??

magic2345

You're RIGHT!!! I forgot to shade the jacket and shirt!! But shading the outer hair's confusing...

And yes, I use photoshop to color it. It's way easier than other programs.
"The world is not beautiful, therefore it is." -Kino's Journey

"Hm...What would uncle say?....
Life is like the clouds, it has two sides and a silverlining inbetween...Like a sandwich!! When life is hard, you take a bite out of the silverlining...."
-Zuko
_________________________________
Game I'm currently working on:
Terra Eternity
Story : 1%
Characters : 3%
Mapping : 1%
Graphics : 3%
Scripts : 20%

Calintz

If you're using Photoshop like me, maybe you should consider making line art out of your sketches before doing the coloring. The picture looks a lot cleaner that way.