All right, all right, more criticisms coming from me.
The first image of him for that new post...It apparently looks like his ears have been chopped off, have anything to say about that? I mean, they're gone! Poof! Kablammo! He's deaf! It still retains the more simplistic style. Those aren't some bad eyes though...Great job on this piece.
For the second drawing, I'll start off from the top down. First of all, the head is too small for a body that long/big. The main reason the head looks so strange actually is because of the hair. It suffers a similar problem as the very first image you posted in this thread. The eyes are also quite strange again, as they are...once again, somewhat uneven. The ears are leaning too, I didn't realize that can happen for a human.
Not a bad choice of clothing, it looks really nice on him. I have minor problems with his hands though, but I'm not going to nitpick anything about that, since I suppose I already blabbered so much about the rest of the stuff. Oh, and one last thing...
Draw a better crotch for Devlin. XD I'm SURE not only you'll have a better image, but Devlin will thank you in the end.
(Unless you give him tight emo pants or something, then he may kill you)