Errant Journey

Started by omegapirate2000, October 16, 2008, 10:37:23 am

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Kagutsuchi

lol, I don't hate it in general, what I hate is that it takes so much time, and if you screw up you have to start all over again. That is really boring.

omegapirate2000

Indeed, it is a dick move on my part.

:D
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KRoP

Screenshot 1:  There's something very uniform and boring about the map here.  There's no real way I can tell you how to fix this.  Quintessence-tbv has some excellent maps.  Maybe you could look at that to get an idea of how to improve your mapping.
Screenshot 2: Oh god the screen tint MY EYEEEEESSSS!  . . . Tone that down a bit.  Also carpets can only be either squares or rectangles, and I don't think that carpet there fits into either category.
Screenshot 4: This map also could use some work.  Again there's not much I can tell you here, but if I wasn't familiar with the RMXP tilesets I wouldn't have guessed this to be the interior of a ship.  Look at some mapping tutorials.  Post in the mapping improvement thread.  Something. idk
Screenshot 5: No one would ever build a room that big and leave it so empty.  I would seriously suggest compacting this map, as empty space is both nonsensical and an eyesore.

omegapirate2000

Thanks for the tips! Indeed, if there is an area of RMXP I am lacking, it is in the mapping department.


Also, about the tint, it's sort of meant to be a disco effect where it changes colours every couple seconds. It sort of makes sense in game. Sort of.
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Kagutsuchi

Yeah, it makes sense the same way people who likes to mix strawberry jelly with cheese makes sense :P

omegapirate2000

Quote from: Kagutsuchi on January 11, 2009, 05:16:51 pm
Yeah, it makes sense the same way people who likes to mix strawberry jelly with cheese makes sense :P

Basically.
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G_G

Its actually a pretty fun game

omegapirate2000

January 19, 2009, 04:13:39 pm #27 Last Edit: January 19, 2009, 04:15:27 pm by omegapirate2000
Yeah, work has been slow recently, as I've been catching up on some of my DS games I've missed out on (and playing fable 2 now that they patched it :D). I'm just starting to get into the groove again.

EDIT: Not to mention only having 1 free day in the week, thanks to my... rigorous school and work schedule.
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omegapirate2000

Ok, I've released a new demo, it's most of the second chapter. I've also included a save file that starts you off at the end of chapter one.
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Calintz

I like it so far...
Maybe a new text for the title screen though...

omegapirate2000

February 13, 2009, 02:53:53 am #30 Last Edit: February 13, 2009, 07:02:52 pm by Starrodkirby86
Quote from: Calintz16438 on February 10, 2009, 10:09:04 pm
I like it so far...
Maybe a new text for the title screen though...

I tried something a bit different with the text just now, I moved the text closer together, it looks like this now:

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Yay? Nay? Give me some opinions on it.

Spoiler-ay to the picture-ay. Whay! ~Love, Starrodkirby86
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omegapirate2000



Second chapter is basically finished, but before I release it I'm going to work on a bunch of my maps to make them look sexier.
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