I got experience modding osu! beatmaps~ U:
I am not going to criticize the first two maps but instead going to criticize the third one.
1. The map is way too empty. This makes an RPG boring on many levels, especially when the player has a slow traveling speed. There needs to be more scenery, trails, obstacles, and especially events.
2. Rivers aren't meant to be square looking. At the right side it's all fine~ But it's so horribly linear on the other side. Man-made rivers and lakes aren't even that linear.
3. Speaking of the river, where the heck is it going at the left side over there? I would assume it's supposed to 'enter the cliff' but due to the tileset's 'limits' you couldn't do that. I don't really know what to tell you other than making your own with a character set or something. I can't recall anything and I'm too lazy to open RPG Maker.
4. Thinking logically, is it really safe to put some rails above water? I would think it'd pollute the water if stray coals fell or wear and tear happened on that area when the carts come out. I'd also believe that the way the rails would be built in a mining town would be the quickest route from Point A to B so they can net the minerals/whatever at a high pace.
5. It may look a bit creative to have that fort over there, but what use does it have besides the possibility of archers raining down on people (Though it's not a high elevation so that wouldn't be a smart idea as well)? (I'm talking about the steel barricaded area or something around the south part that's surrounded by water)
6. I can't tell when zoomed out, but I don't think the mine tiles nearby the cliff (The brown stones) fit well when transitioning with the grass tiles. Kind of like oil and water...? And why is the grass always the darker colored one? Variety is good, you know.
Some positive points of the map:
1. You know how to use cliffs! (Or at least, the bottom of it) Yay~
2. It has some nice basic structure. It's a good barebones map. Needs detail though~
3. The river on the right looks a bit natural at least. ^^ Kinda narrow though.
4. Yay on Waterfall~