I assumed you drew that yourself. That's really...soothing and...delicate even. I love that sort of style.
However, I'm against the text you chose. It doesn't fit the title screen, at least that's my opinion. Overall, you did a spectacular job. It's not a beautiful art masterpiece, but in itself it's very unique and should be applauded for that. Question though...Is that a haystack or a hill? No, that should be a hill...The thing south of the castle...It looks like a haystack! D: