Ryex's Music thread

[Ryex]

I made this 1 minuet piece today and i wanted people to advise me on how to improve it

MP3 320kbps 2.41MB
http://www.asantear.890m.com/downloads/untitled.mp3

[Subsonic_Noise]

I like it^^
It sounds a bit misterious and even scary.
I normally don't listen to this kind of music, but this is nice^^
Will you finish it soon?
(or is it already finished like this?)

[Ryex]

well it's kinda finished... I'm using it in my cut scene and so far it has lined up perfectly... I was just thinking that maybe people could spot inconsistencies that I didn't, comment on the flow, tell me if they thought the transition was a bit rough in places, stuff like that.

[Subsonic_Noise]

k, then I'll do that^^

1. I think the pads at he beginning are a bit overpowering. But perhaps thats just me.
2. The transition when the drums come in feels a bit strange. Like, they come in without a "warning".
3. I think the flow is good.
4. There is no real end in this song?

[Ryex]

k, then I'll do that^^

1. I think the pads at he beginning are a bit overpowering. But perhaps thats just me.
2. The transition when the drums come in feels a bit strange. Like, they come in without a "warning".
3. I think the flow is good.
4. There is no real end in this song?

1) I think your right I should tone those down a bit
2) ya I kinda wanted it that way so that all good i think
3) thank you
4) true, in the cut scene I'm using it in it fades out just before it "ends" but i do need to add a real ending

thanks for you input!

[Subsonic_Noise]

No problem^^
I don't know your cutscene, so I can't say much more, the track isn't that long.
But tell me when you uploaded a video or something.

[Ryex]

anyone else feel like commenting?

[Blizzard]

What program are you using?

[Ryex]

FL Studio 8

[Blizzard]

When you're done with it, would you send me the project? I'd like to remix it. ^_^

[Ryex]

why is that?

[Blizzard]

I'd just like to remix it. When the various sounds start in the second half, it sounds like a good beat would suit very well. Of course, you don't have to.

[Ryex]

project file PM

[FenrisHalo]

Sounds great. Is this FL Studio free?

I know it's not very contructive what I have to say, but I think it's perfect as it is. I'm going to use this if it's alright with you
You'd be creditet of course.

[Blizzard]

No, FL Studio costs quite a bit of money. >.< There are several editions for different prices, though. I think the cheapest was $299 or $399.

[Arkaea Halfdemon]

And then there's torrents.

[Blizzard]

How do you think I got it? <_<;

[Arkaea Halfdemon]

The same way I did 

[FenrisHalo]

There's really only one choice, but it takes soooo long for the gawdarn torrents to download, and only half of 'em ever start...

But anyway, is it the Producer edition i gotta get? It's the one which the first 4 google sites are for (though none of them actually allow u to download anything..)

EDIT: Yay, it's only gonna take 16 hours! W00t

[Blizzard]

XXL is the best.

EDIT: Since Ryex didn't name his song, neither did I. :3
http://www.sendspace.com/file/1l4bg1
Took me 3 and a half hours including mastering.

@Ryex: If you want, I can PM you back the project of the remix.