Xelias's Icon Shop

Started by Xelias, August 21, 2009, 02:49:21 am

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Aqua

Yes, I meant criticism, but "commenting" sounds better than "critiquing" (funky Q D:)
And criticising just sounds bad D:

Want me to PM it to you or post here?
And would you want me to get examples of what I'm talking about? XD

Xelias

You can post it here. I don't have to be ashamed of my weaknesses (my, sounds like a cheesy video game character quote  :haha:)
And bring the exemples. The more the merrier !


My sprites
Kuja Tales of the World style :

Aqua

August 22, 2009, 02:40:31 pm #22 Last Edit: August 22, 2009, 02:41:45 pm by Aqua
Your icons looks hardly shaded at all.


I can't really tell where the light source is on this one.

You also used a lot of solid black on your icons.

A basic rule of graphics is to never use pure colors such as #00000 (Black), #FFFFFF (White), #FF0000 (Red), etc.
Super highly saturated colors are also usually a no-no.
For the computer, perhaps just make it a dark grey instead of black.


On this sword, it doesn't seem like your normal style and barely looks colored.  All the colors look like a dull grey.
This would be a time where you would use a pretty saturated blue for the marking on the sword.
Also, it needs shading.

I'm not gonna comment much on the editted VX icons, since they're just edits... XD

The main thing you gotta work on is shading your icons and keeping a consistent style.



I'll show you some of mine and my shading style.
My style is also different from RTP, but it's smooth xD
(Please don't use these... >.<)


(Sorry... this is a kinda bad critique =/)

Tazero

-What does it look like - I need a blood orb like thingy...Like a drop of water but red and another one completely grey (diff shades)
-Do you want a border No thankyou
-If yes, which 2 colors do you want I SAID NO THANKYOU


If you were a fish...

Xelias

August 22, 2009, 03:35:57 pm #24 Last Edit: August 22, 2009, 03:37:01 pm by Xelias
To Aqua : OK for me.  I'll remember all of it.
But before sticking to only 1 style...
Which style should I choose (Ugly Test Weapon ) ?

I - : RTP Style. My least favorite.
II - : Blended Style. You use a variation of this one, no ?
III- : Xelias Style  :) Fusion of RTP-Style with strange reflect patterns. My favorite.

To Tazero : In my VX Icon Database I found that (Unknown Creator) : Would you like me to edit it before I make the grey drop ?


My sprites
Kuja Tales of the World style :

Tazero

Yes please could you make it bigger with more highlights though? And the grey one should match the cogwheel thingy...Thanks ... Special Thanks ^-^


If you were a fish...

Aqua

Just go with whichevr one you want. XD

Those random reflects on Xelias style are kinda weird and random though :P

Tazero



If you were a fish...

Xelias

@Aqua : I only use the reflect things on steel weapons. Zoom at 1600% and you will see it is not random AND there are more than 1 reflect color.
@Tazero : I use Photofiltre. However, I couldn't enlarge the droplet so I made a custom one.
So again : edits ?


My sprites
Kuja Tales of the World style :

Tazero

It looks great =]
I'll dl Photothingy and edit it to my exact thingy =]


If you were a fish...

Subsonic_Noise

Quote from: Xelias on August 22, 2009, 01:50:42 pm
@Subsonic Noise : I will edit my main post : evidently, I do these for you, so they are yours. Edit them as you want it.

That's a thanks and a third level ++ XDD
Yes, it's easy to get level ups from me.