Something I threw together this morning ;)

[vvalkingman]

Who are you?

I am a witch born of the shadows who has known only emptiness.

Though I have been released from the abysmal dark, there is still a lingering void within
me. At one time, I believed that I had found completeness through love; however, the
hands of time and fate are cruel, leaving only emptiness.

I was deemed too dangerous by those of my blood and the man I loved was taken from
me by the seduction of power. He aided in sealing me away, and here I sit, in the
darkness, covered head to foot in seals, bound by my own folly.

I cannot move, I cannot see, I can only sit here in my prison, frozen in time, waiting...
Time envelops both love and pain, until they fade away. Color fades to grey.

Though I cannot remember when, a whisper began echoing deep within my heart, fainter
then drops of evening dew. A glimmer of light appeared in the distance, hardly visible.
May this prayer escape my prison and reach the heavens where you are, so far away.

Please find me, oh glimmering light, that I might be free from this unbearable void.



Comments? Critiques? Jokes? hehe

[(Hexamin)]

Who are you?

I am a witch born of the shadows who has known only emptiness.

Though I have been released form the abysmal dark, there is still a lingering void within
me. At one time, I believed that I had found completeness through love; however, the
hands of time and fate are cruel, leaving only emptiness.

I was deemed too dangerous by those of my blood and the man I loved was taken from
me by the seduction of power. He aided in sealing me away, and here I sit, in the
darkness, covered head to foot in seals, bound by my own folly.

I cannot move, I cannot see, I can only sit here in my prison, frozen in time, waiting...
Time envelops both love and pain, until they fade away. Color fades to grey.

Though I cannot remember when, a whisper began echoing deep within my heart, fainter
then drops of evening dew. A glimmer of light appeared in the distance, hardly visible.
May this prayer escape my prison and reach the heavens where you are, so far away.

Please find me, oh glimmering light, that I might be free from this unbearable void.



Comments? Critiques? Jokes? hehe

But, so, like... continue this?  Or what?

[Subsonic_Noise]

I like this. Also, all paragraphs but the last and first one begin either with "I" or "though".

[WhiteRose]

I like this. Also, all paragraphs but the last and first one begin either with "I" or "though".

He did that on purpose. WITIITP, when spelled backwards, is "Ptiitiw," which, as we all know, is a secret code word that, with the proper key, translates to "Carrots." He posted that secret code word in order to subliminally influence you to come post in this topic, Karp Karp, and obviously, it worked!!!

.... ?

That aside, the writing seems interesting. Is it part of a larger story you are working on?

[(Hexamin)]

I love your logic WhiteRose!  *lvl up*

And... yes, this should be part of a larger story!  RUN WITH IT!

[vvalkingman]

I am glad that WhiteRose got my true message but yea it's from a storyline that I've been playing around with for awhile. As the title describes, it is something that I threw together when I woke up this morning. So, sorry for the repetitious "I" and "Though" hehe I have three projects cooking at the moment but after I am done with them I think I'll have had enough "practice" to actively pursue THAT storyline. I'll keep you guys updated on it I'll throw some more teasers out later on