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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #20 on: May 20, 2010, 09:06:44 PM »
That's a good idea. I have only 2 chapters left and the summary. I hope that I can maybe get it up by the end of this week. If not, then during next week for sure.

@WhiteRose: Because I am a man who pays back his debts, I can make a script for you since your mom is helping me out. :)
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #21 on: May 20, 2010, 09:09:24 PM »
since your mom is helping me out.  :naughty:

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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #22 on: May 20, 2010, 09:10:10 PM »
I can pay her back, too. :naughty:

EDIT: Almost done. >:3
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #23 on: May 23, 2010, 04:42:30 PM »
I can pay her back, too. :naughty:
D: I'd prefer if you didn't.

Anyway, she's done with this part; I just need to type her changes into the Word file (she prefers to work with paper, so it's all written on a printed version of the document) and upload it for you.

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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #24 on: May 23, 2010, 10:40:39 PM »
Alright. I'll finish the last piece and put it all up. If you can upload it until then, I'll fix the mistakes first.
God, I hope there aren't so many. xD

EDIT: BTW, you now have an official cameo appearance in the game as "Rapture Rose", a whip for Ariana. <3

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I can pay her back, too. :naughty:
D: I'd prefer if you didn't.

Lol, you're not my type.

EDIT: Done.
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« Reply #25 on: May 24, 2010, 12:32:45 AM »
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The speed of this scolling text makes me imagine you saying this in a really slow, retarded voice. But congratulations anyways.

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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #26 on: May 24, 2010, 12:48:40 AM »
Ok, I uploaded it already. There's a piece of text in chapter 7.2.1. that I forgot to add (formerly chapter 10). Besides that, this is it.

EDIT: I just want to mention that I'd really like all of this done before the end of next week. The thesis is due on June 18th and I'd like to send it in at least 3 weeks earlier since I'm expecting my mentor to read it and fix additional mistakes. Besides,detailed reading of 138 pages doesn't take only one hour. >.<
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #27 on: May 24, 2010, 11:13:06 PM »
Ok, I uploaded it already. There's a piece of text in chapter 7.2.1. that I forgot to add (formerly chapter 10). Besides that, this is it.

EDIT: I just want to mention that I'd really like all of this done before the end of next week. The thesis is due on June 18th and I'd like to send it in at least 3 weeks earlier since I'm expecting my mentor to read it and fix additional mistakes. Besides,detailed reading of 138 pages doesn't take only one hour. >.<
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #28 on: May 24, 2010, 11:15:31 PM »
<3

I owe you one.
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #29 on: May 25, 2010, 10:39:25 AM »
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I dont know why, but it makes me laugh.. xD  :haha:
Maybe I'll help, since i have 9 hours every day.  ;)
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #30 on: May 25, 2010, 10:52:14 AM »
Funny, I thought that I fixed that.
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #31 on: May 29, 2010, 01:57:59 AM »
Any progress?
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #32 on: May 29, 2010, 02:22:59 AM »
I just have a little more typing to do; it shouldn't take me more than half an hour, but I've been a little busy this week (last week of school, so I had a few loose ends to tie up.) I'll definitely finish it and upload it for you before I go to bed tonight. (So, 5 hours tops.)

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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #33 on: May 29, 2010, 05:30:13 AM »
You missed many s's in the end of plural nouns..

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Chaos continued creating more Guardians of Chaos,

Needs to be

Chaos continued creating more of his Guardians, or Chaos continued creating more Guardians, only....
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #34 on: May 29, 2010, 06:13:00 AM »
You missed many s's in the end of plural nouns..

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Chaos continued creating more Guardians of Chaos,

Needs to be

Chaos continued creating more of his Guardians, or Chaos continued creating more Guardians, only....

I don't see anything incorrect in that sentence as the 'Guardian of Chaos' is a title, and the S's he leaves off are also correct, as it is always part of a possessive case for a name ending in S or and S sound (such as X.)
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/possessives.htm

EDIT: I'm typing up the last few edits right now; I'll upload the finished version in just a minute or two.

EDIT: Finished!
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Though the phrasing in a few sentences could be improved, everything is now grammatically correct.
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #35 on: May 29, 2010, 10:59:24 AM »
I love you.

But seriously, if you need a script or something, PM me. I'll put all of this into my thesis during today and send it to my mentor.

BTW, what's your mom's name? I'd like to give her my special thanks.

EDIT: Ah, shit. :/ There's still the other chapters to do. Well, at least those chapters are only 40 pages altogether. I'll send this in anyway and see what my mentor says.
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #36 on: May 29, 2010, 12:07:59 PM »
faction is the one without s. and I forgot the other ones...

reason is he mentioned two? factions.

maybe he left the s...

But In the GOC(Guardians of Chaos) sentence...., It sounds awkward u know.....

awkward...
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« Reply #37 on: May 29, 2010, 12:26:30 PM »
If you see it as a name, it doesn't.
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #38 on: May 30, 2010, 04:52:46 AM »
Maybe...... i have 16 days left..........

EDIT: Wait, I researched on the internet:Redundancy
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Re: Diploma Thesis
« Reply #39 on: May 30, 2010, 06:22:26 AM »
Maybe...... i have 16 days left..........

EDIT: Wait, I researched on the internet:Redundancy
It's not redundant. 'Guardian of Chaos' is a title. Leaving any part out of it or changing the wording would be changing the title.