I mean yea, you're intentions are definitely in the right place. It's a good beat, but I suppose I am assuming that the encounter rate is high. I'm used to only taking like twenty or thirty steps on the map and BAM! This song won't have picked up by that time.
Anyway, looking at it from the view that it's a sample for admittance into the Wipe Team I would say it's great. If you're only showcasing your skillset, then I'd say you're talented. It did seem like the timing was off a little bit around the middle. About after the third rhythm came in, but IDK. I only listened to enough of the song to get the gist of it.
Overall grade... 'B-' for me.
I like it. =)