Aw, man...thought I made her pretty well...Got any suggestions on how I could make her different?
Also, here's Devlin and Dr.horlit:
Name - Devlin- the fierce one / Aquila- revival of the fallen.(After he is revived twice.)
Age -16
Appearance - Red hair with orange tips at the end. He wears a dark blue jacket with coattails. He has gray pants and brown shoes.
Weapon - Dual Swords
Talents/Hobbies - He can control Forae, an essence that fills the world and makes up the elements.
Strengths - He has determination. He fights for what he believes is right. When things become rough, he becomes cooperative. He has a strong will to live.
Flaws - He's stubborn as a mule. He makes decisions based on instinct. He does not take criticism well. He is critical of others. He cannot see his own flaws. He pushes people away from him. His will to live at any cost also makes him do rash actions.
Likes - People who think highly of him. Money. Battles. Gambling
Hates - People who criticize him. Poor people. People with siblings and parents
Fears -Death, confinement, bugs (yeah...)
Occupation -Traveling swordsman.
Hometown - Genivo
Social Class - peasant
History/backstory - Devlin was always made fun of as a child. He once lived with his
father and mother, but his father would always ignore him. He has one brother named Truman, the loyal one, but his brother also never paid attention to him. He would beat Devlin up if Devlin annoyed him. One day, his father left his mother for another woman and never came back. Times were hard and His mother could not support him so she abandoned him with his brother. An old man finds them. He happens to be a swordsman named Steiner. They become close and they learn how to fight. However, Devlin would lack in skills while Truman would exceed. He was recognized for his abilities while Devlin was overshadowed. He was taken into the royal family of Romulot. Devlin resented his brother's successes. At the age of 16, Devlin left Steiner without telling him and began to wander the world.
Current story - He wanders into a small village called Udin searching for something to drink and that is where his story begins...
Name - Dr.Horlit
Age-37
Appearance -
Weapon - None/ Foratic spear( Once the Soul link with Aditi(Mother of the gods) has been made.)
Talents/Hobbies - Can use Forae, he often stares into the night sky.
Strengths - Can use Forae even though he is not supposed to be able to use it. Headstrong.
Flaws - His determination and headstrong like behavior is so extreme that his actions sometimes defy reason.
Likes - The night. Tools. Logic
Hates - People who bully others.
Fears -Death.
Occupation -Head scientist of the Government.
Hometown - Unknown.
Social Class - peasant
History/backstory -A sickly child, he was always teased because he could never play sports. He lived through the war of Haolin. However, he was the only one who survived in his hometown. He hid form the soldiers who invaded and watched his family get slaughtered right before his eyes. He found another town and was taken in by a woman named Mary. They grew close, but their relationship would not last long. Bandits came to plunder the town during the war. They killed Mary and she fell on top of him while she was protecting him. He was kidnapped and since he had no family he was worthless to them. They stabbed him and threw him off of a cliff. He was only 12 years old then. He survived, but he lost his memory of what happened. He wandered into the kingdom of Romulot and lived with a shop owner. There he studied hard and became a scientist.
Current story -After the events of the meteor he joined the Government and became the head scientist. That is where his story began...