Title Graphics

[winkio]

maybe some rocks in the grass?  Like this:

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[Shalaren]

ill see what I can do :B
any suggestions for font?

[winkio]

I really liked the last font you used.  definitely keep the gold outline, but since the background colors are different, maybe make the body blue/green this time?  or maybe even yellow? idk, you'll figure out something good

[Shalaren]

Sky

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Flowers

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Yes I know how the look, I tried playing with the colors S:, its just not there.. so I might just go with a rock.

[winkio]

Desaturate the grass and make it a little darker, and I think it would look a whole lot better.  Also, it's starting to look too jumbled =/

[Shalaren]

 

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[ForeverZer0]

 

[Shalaren]

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[Shalaren]

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these are not improvements, as I said im playing around with it to find something good.

[winkio]

There's just too much.  Try doing it in parts, for example, just do the text and the sky, or just the text and the grass, or just the sky and the symbols and notes, etc.

[Shalaren]

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THERE WINKIO! S: I did what you told me and thats how it looks

[winkio]

just ditch it then, I guess, and keep working on the new version.

[G_G]

Remove a lot of the grass and it'll look better.

[Shalaren]

for the logo, how do you guys like this symbol?

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[Spaceman McConaughey]

for the logo, how do you guys like this symbol?

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Unless you made that yourself, I do not think so at all. Are you seekra on DA?

(not being a smart-ass, just genuinely asking.)

If it's not yours, make one of your own so it can be original to the game.

[Shalaren]

I meant the concept or a lyre

[winkio]

Why not use the one Hatsamu posted?  I like the detail on it.

[WhiteRose]

umm, Ill get to it today, though Ill probably have to make a new title screen. cause the one I have is to bright.

ok thats the direction of a title that im thinking of, what do you think?

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I agree with winkio. I really like the style of this one, but the strong saturation difference between the grass and the sky isn't to my taste.

[winkio]

we talked on IRC earlier and found some good reference images, he said he'll work on a new one with grass/sky tomorrow.

[Shalaren]

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ok worked on the grass, I kinda like it now o:

and an attempt of making a different concept

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