Quote from: Starrodkirby86 on July 19, 2009, 01:20:14 pm
Haha, it has the generic atmosphere of a great RPG Maker game. Pleasant to see something like this come out. On the first screenshot, is it really needed to put a window on a back-wall?
I see a lot of the dialog is pretty nice too...to an extent, if it needs work, haha. Though usually I would figure youth and young ones are to not say their contractions fully, like instead of they are, they go they're, you know? I seem to see a lot of opportunities where you can shorten it with apostrophes. That can help in some dialog cutting.
Excellent overall.
Haha yea thats one of the things I need to work on. I'm a one man army, so grammar will always be an issue with me. Thanks for the input, i'll be sure to try to shorten some areas.
Quote from: Blizzard on July 19, 2009, 02:42:16 pm
The shadows in the last screenshot look a bit weird. Maybe you should set the priority the walltiles to a higher value. 2 or higher should do it. As for the rest they look interesting.
BTW, have you thought about using a smaller line height in the message box since the font is significantly smaller than the default?
I been trying to fix that shadow problem for ages, that might work. Thanks for that. As for the line height, i'm most definitely trying to shorten it, but as of late, I kinda changed the font size. So it might be fine the way it is now. I'm not sure