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RPG Maker => Resources => Topic started by: Camellia on December 24, 2011, 01:16:07 am

Title: Sprite-constructive criticism
Post by: Camellia on December 24, 2011, 01:16:07 am
I feel really :...: :n00b:

I'm not sure if this is a place to post this. Though this is some kind of expressing my creativity.
Just wondering what you think.

My first try on spriting. :negative:
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(http://i1127.photobucket.com/albums/l623/tsubaki_y/MISSSprite.png)


I'm trying to sprite a really awesome character for my game. Hopefully, some sprite-experts could give constructive criticism.
:plz:

Oh, and...

HAPPY SNOWBALL THROWING!!!
Title: Re: Sprite-constructive criticism
Post by: G_G on December 24, 2011, 01:32:16 am
Moved to resources. Seems more fitting.

I'll tell you its pretty nice for a first draft. I couldn't even get a decent outline if I tried. ._. Anyways, the sprite looks great, but it needs more shading in my opinion. I love how the hair is, just needs a tad bit of shading. Also the shadow under the feet look a tad odd to me. Maybe just go with one bigger circle instead of two smaller ones. I'm not a spriter so I can't really give the criticism you're probably looking for.
Title: Re: Sprite-constructive criticism
Post by: Camellia on December 24, 2011, 01:48:20 am
QuoteMoved to resources. Seems more fitting.

Noted. Next time I'll post here.

QuoteI'll tell you its pretty nice for a first draft. I couldn't even get a decent outline if I tried. ._. Anyways, the sprite looks great...

Thanks game_guy. That really encourages me to practice more.

Quote...but it needs more shading in my opinion. I love how the hair is, just needs a tad bit of shading. Also the shadow under the feet look a tad odd to me. Maybe just go with one bigger circle instead of two smaller ones.

Agreed thoroughly. That's what I lack. I understand color pallet but I don't know how to shade it correctly. Tried reading some tutorials but I'm still clueless.  :???: The shadow looked odd?  :^_^': Okay, I guess I'll change it.

QuoteI'm not a spriter so I can't really give the criticism you're probably looking for.

Nah, everyone have the right to critic IF they KNOW what they are talking about.