Chaos Project

RPG Maker => Resources => Topic started by: computerwizoo7 on November 16, 2008, 12:54:03 am

Title: My contribution!
Post by: computerwizoo7 on November 16, 2008, 12:54:03 am
it pains me to give away a good character like this but i have to do it!  :( don't talk about it just take it!
it will break my heart man!  :'(
(http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/1755/toushiroru2.png)
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: DeathLock on November 16, 2008, 09:44:26 am
Sorry to break your heart, but it could use some work.

1. It seems you didn't go "off" the template, the clothing seems stuck. :\
2. More contrast on the clothing, darker shades.

But, better than most first tries. Even better than my first sprite. Lol.
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: Satoh on November 16, 2008, 12:17:32 pm
Quote from: DeathLock on November 16, 2008, 09:44:26 am
Sorry to break your heart, but it could use some work.

1. It seems you didn't go "off" the template, the clothing seems stuck. :\
2. More contrast on the clothing, darker shades.

But, better than most first tries. Even better than my first sprite. Lol.


It looks to me like it's supposed to be a tight fitting body suit. Similar to the ones in Evangeleon... but still different.

It could use a little more shading, but the design looks fine to me...

All in all I like it.
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: computerwizoo7 on November 16, 2008, 05:24:38 pm
i really didn't want to hear that! but i guess it helps.  :^_^':
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: Ryex on November 16, 2008, 11:17:25 pm
lol it's ok did you see how they nagged me about how bad my icon was? even AFTER I improved it lol :V:
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: DeathLock on November 17, 2008, 10:28:26 am
Quote from: SatohIt looks to me like it's supposed to be a tight fitting body suit. Similar to the ones in Evangeleon... but still different.

Tight... XD
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: computerwizoo7 on November 20, 2008, 08:09:10 pm
lol how did you get them to like the icon?
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: Satoh on November 21, 2008, 09:29:27 am
Quote from: DeathLock on November 17, 2008, 10:28:26 am
Quote from: SatohIt looks to me like it's supposed to be a tight fitting body suit. Similar to the ones in Evangeleon... but still different.

Tight... XD


I'm not exactly sure what your point was in that statement O.o

Quote from: computerwizoo7 on November 20, 2008, 08:09:10 pm
lol how did you get them to like the icon?


And as I said, I like it. it just needs a slightly dark shadow around the edges.
Title: Re: My contribution!
Post by: DeathLock on November 21, 2008, 10:32:09 am
The "tight" part of what you said, made me laugh. There was no point to make. :P