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RPG Maker => Resources => Topic started by: fireman199 on January 05, 2010, 09:20:48 pm

Title: My First Character And My Job ( Fireman ) New Edit
Post by: fireman199 on January 05, 2010, 09:20:48 pm
(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/9536/backdraft.png) (http://"http://img23.imageshack.us/i/backdraft.png/")

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Face
(http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6301/fbackdraft.png) (http://"http://img294.imageshack.us/i/fbackdraft.png/")

Character in black
(http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/8776/backdraftblack.png) (http://"http://img715.imageshack.us/i/backdraftblack.png/")

Battler
(http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/5741/bbackdraft.png) (http://"http://img697.imageshack.us/i/bbackdraft.png/")


Credit Character : backdraft ( Fireman199 )
Credit Face And Battler : ???? I'm Sorry. I don't Know.
Title: Re: My First Character And My Job ( Fireman )
Post by: G_G on January 05, 2010, 09:41:38 pm
Shape is pretty good. If you can I recommend shading the actual suit instead of using just one color for the orange, red, gray, and yellow.
Then it would look decent.

Its pretty good but shading would definetly help.
Title: Re: My First Character And My Job ( Fireman )
Post by: Jackolas on January 06, 2010, 03:17:24 am
first of all.. its better than i ever will be able to make 1, so congrats on that :P

Second, There are 2 things I think you can improve on.
the first is indeed shading. it will give the character a little more depth and less like a flat stamp
the second is to give the emblem on the helm a little more colour. atm its hardly seen and can be mistaken as a part of the face.
Title: Re: My First Character And My Job ( Fireman ) New Edit
Post by: fireman199 on January 28, 2010, 12:34:39 pm
New Edit 29 01 2010