Chaos Project

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*adds poll* There is a "POST NEW POLL" button right next to the "NEW TOPIC" button.
*slaps* Images go into spoilers.
*slaps again* Big images ALWAYS go into spoilers.

Quote from: Blizzard on January 09, 2011, 05:31:44 am
*adds poll* There is a "POST NEW POLL" button right next to the "NEW TOPIC" button.
*slaps* Images go into spoilers.
*slaps again* Big images ALWAYS go into spoilers.

*slaps* I didnt know

*slaps again* Those arent big...

You mean you've been a member here for over a week and you STILL haven't read the rules (http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,4.0.html)? Are you actually TRYING to get banned?

Anything above 400x400 is considered big.

Quote from: Blizzard on January 09, 2011, 05:36:35 am
You mean you've been a member here for over a week and you STILL haven't read the rules (http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,4.0.html)? Are you actually TRYING to get banned?

Anything above 400x400 is considered big.

Ohw, And yes, I've read the rules, but not concentrated xd scrolled trough it :D

They all look very generic. Nothing to remember about them.

Quote from: Subsonic_Noise on January 09, 2011, 06:42:31 am
They all look very generic. Nothing to remember about them.

I'm very bad at making title screens and game overs

How should I make them then? It needs to be very mystic and it needs to atract people

Quote from: Futendra on January 09, 2011, 05:39:08 am
Ohw, And yes, I've read the rules, but not concentrated xd scrolled trough it :D

So you didn't read them?

Quote from: Tuggernuts on January 09, 2011, 07:51:58 am

Quote from: Futendra on January 09, 2011, 05:39:08 am
Ohw, And yes, I've read the rules, but not concentrated xd scrolled trough it :D

So you didn't read them?

Now I've readed it all,

If this was only based on the logo and title screen alone, I would say that it needs to portray the sense of horror. But there's probably more to it in your game than just that.

Remove the girl; she's too inconsistent and gives some Evanescence sort-of vibe from it. The best title screen is one that's well constructed and more than just your default layout scene. =o If you look at Chronicles of Sir Lag-a-Lot and Legend of Lexima, you can see there's been much more done to make it a more authentic / professional game experience.

Also, yeaaah.  :rulez: <3

for an rpg maker game those are horrible... for a movie title/book title those are good.

Quote from: Futendra on January 09, 2011, 04:59:31 am
Random Vector tree?

Image 1: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen3.png)

Randon Vector tree? This covers the girls head

Image 2: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen2.png)

Random Vector tree ?

Image 3: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen1.png)

Image 4: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen4.png)

Tell me!

My point is made. If Its part of the logo/title words make the tree black or grey..Not something that looks like a sad attempt in bleding to the bg :3

Quote from: Tazero on January 09, 2011, 02:26:21 pm

Quote from: Futendra on January 09, 2011, 04:59:31 am
Random Vector tree?

Image 1: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen3.png)

Randon Vector tree? This covers the girls head

Image 2: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen2.png)

Random Vector tree ?

Image 3: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen1.png)

Image 4: ShowHide

(http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb445/Futendra/Titlescreen4.png)

Tell me!

My point is made. If Its part of the logo/title words make the tree black or grey..Not something that looks like a sad attempt in bleding to the bg :3

The logo is made by mroedesigns, not me, and about the not looking too rpg maker, its not easy. And its not a zombie game or sumthing

I think the point Taz was trying to make is that the tree in the logo should look like it's part of the logo; at the moment, it looks like a half-baked attempt to add another tree into the background.

I think that the third image is the best, and if you make the fog move, or maybe make it look like an old film, it would be really cool I think.
Oh, and also, put the logo somewhere where the tree in the logo melt into the background..

I disagree with the fact that the title screens are too simple. In my opinion, a title screen should be simple. I've seen too many games where the titles are so crowded, you don't know what to look at. Not a very welcoming first look at your project lol. But then again, that's just my opinion ^^.

If you had to pick one, I'd go with the first. Nice and clean. However, I'd follow the advice given by WhiteRose and some others. Try and mesh the logo in more with the background.

Can i post my titlescreens here? If not we should make a thread for titles/gameovers/logos.

3rd is bst.

Quote from: cyclope on February 01, 2011, 12:04:39 am
Can i post my titlescreens here? If not we should make a thread for titles/gameovers/logos.

Then make it.

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None of the above...  Sorry but there was not an option for it in the poll. I just didn't look hard enough.

Quote from: DeXuS on February 04, 2011, 12:54:30 am
None of the above...  Sorry but there was not an option for it in the poll.

Actually there is.

I'm a Graphics Designer, so I'm giving you a constructive criticism/advice: You need to remove that floating tree from the Logotype; it completely messes up the background image and, anyway, independant from the back I find the Isologotype not well constructed, I mean, the "Unleashed Death" phrase has its own base while the tree has another one very far from it that "pulls down" the visual route, breaking the harmony it should have.

If you want to keep the tree at the logo, maybe something like this would work better:



(This is a quick example made within a minute, but I hope it shows what I mean)


Now, onto the title thing, once you correct the logo issue, if you take the suggestion, of course, I liked better the 3rd one, but both that one or the 2nd one could work if you make an animated title screen with an "old movie effect" like someone previously suggested.