My poems

Tazero · February 28, 2009, 04:01:16 pm

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fugibo · February 28, 2009, 05:41:01 pm

Those make absolutely no sense.

Tazero · February 28, 2009, 05:47:31 pm

Oh they make plenty sense my friend but with deeper meaning

Diokatsu · February 28, 2009, 05:50:01 pm

Quote from: WcW on February 28, 2009, 05:41:01 pm
Those make absolutely no sense.

Can everyone just stop being assholes? I don't care what you think about him, just be a nice person. So what if he's been a spammer and a generally annoying forum-goer. You all should just learn to grow up and actually act the mature and educated people you think you are.

The first one...It's strangely organized. I'm not sure what you're trying to say.

The second is nice, yet hasn't the punctuation I'd expect. Go through some grammar checks and resubmit them.

Quote from: MetaKnight on February 28, 2009, 05:47:31 pm
Oh they make plenty sense my friend but with deeper meaning

Deep meaning? Deep meaning shouldn't compromise understanding.

Punn · February 28, 2009, 06:16:29 pm

This actually feels like a rap then a poem.
Either way, it's alright. Nice MK

Tazero · February 28, 2009, 06:38:24 pm

Ty Dio , punn and ....WcW
These are just little things i said as i was typing lolz

fugibo · February 28, 2009, 09:14:47 pm

I said they don't make sense. They don't. I didn't say "Hey, morn, GTFO of CP and quit posting your effed up opinions on life, you suck balls, and this poetry sucks epic." I said "Those make absolutely no sense."

Edit:
Oh yeah, and you are good at writing. Just have a point next time 0_o

Tazero · March 01, 2009, 11:00:43 am

lol Fish
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fugibo · March 01, 2009, 11:22:58 am

Yes, but I wasn't aiming for poetry there, was I? I was just aiming for genius. Completely different topic.

Reno-s--Joker · March 03, 2009, 01:58:34 am

I like the second one better than the first.

Tazero · March 06, 2009, 06:59:05 am

WcW isn't really a World Conquering Wizrd he's really a

Woozle cooing while_whimpering

Reno-s--Joker · March 06, 2009, 04:27:48 pm

Huh? That was uncalled for. He gave you a good comment.
...

Tazero · March 06, 2009, 04:31:08 pm

Maybe hes a
Way cool wizard?

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My poems

Tazero

February 28, 2009, 04:01:16 pm Last Edit: February 28, 2009, 04:04:22 pm by MetaKnight

fugibo

February 28, 2009, 05:41:01 pm #1

Tazero

February 28, 2009, 05:47:31 pm #2

Diokatsu

February 28, 2009, 05:50:01 pm #3

Punn

February 28, 2009, 06:16:29 pm #4

Tazero

February 28, 2009, 06:38:24 pm #5

fugibo

February 28, 2009, 09:14:47 pm #6

Tazero

March 01, 2009, 11:00:43 am #7

fugibo

March 01, 2009, 11:22:58 am #8

Reno-s--Joker

March 03, 2009, 01:58:34 am #9

Tazero

March 06, 2009, 06:59:05 am #10

Reno-s--Joker

March 06, 2009, 04:27:48 pm #11

Tazero

March 06, 2009, 04:31:08 pm #12