Grassland

Started by Calintz, January 06, 2010, 05:39:39 am

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Calintz

January 06, 2010, 05:39:39 am Last Edit: January 13, 2010, 03:40:15 pm by Calintz
I made this for no actual reason.
Just to see how it would stack up.

Any comments??
It's a battle back.

Old: v1.0
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New: v2.0
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New: v2.3
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New: v2.4
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Holyrapid

I don“t see any pictures... Not even the little cross thingy box tha comes when the pics not displaying properly...

Calintz

it's been uploaded as an attachment ... it's not showing??

Holyrapid

Nope. Sorry. Upload it to imageshack or something...

G_G

Calintz I think attachments were made for the Remoxes Team. And any want thats not a Remoxes member can't see them.
Here's the actual image.

Starrodkirby86

Only members with RMX-OS permission can view attachments. Next time, just upload it onto an alternate image site. :P Attachments are made only for RMX-OS anyway.

The grass looks fine from far away, but it then starts to look a little too brush-like (Especially around the ground, it almost looks like you can see a trail). That being said, it also seems strange the sky is like that, though it looks pretty nice.

That's all I have to say. :3 It can make a fine battle background.

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wolfspirit

Off-topic:
Quote from: Starrodkirby86 on January 06, 2010, 01:01:36 pm
Only members with RMX-OS permission can view attachments.

You mean, Rm-Online System? :O.o:
On-topic: It looks fine, but not really what I would call beautiful. (not that I could make any back, that doesn't looks ridiculous :P)

Starrodkirby86

Quote from: wolfspirit on January 06, 2010, 01:18:12 pm
Off-topic:
Quote from: Starrodkirby86 on January 06, 2010, 01:01:36 pm
Only members with RMX-OS permission can view attachments.

You mean, Rm-Online System? :O.o:

Ooooops, I meant Remexos. :B I kind of just use that abbreviation for both things. <3

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Holyrapid

A little too much grass. Make more sky visible, unless this is meant for a pokemon game, or something...
Other than that, it looks pretty nice, though i too must note about the grass looking brush-like nearer the down part.

Calintz

January 07, 2010, 11:52:29 pm #9 Last Edit: January 08, 2010, 12:03:04 am by Calintz
Updated ...
Check first post for newest version.

G_G

Second one looks way better Calintz! :)

Keep up the work!

Calintz

January 08, 2010, 12:36:49 am #11 Last Edit: January 10, 2010, 01:28:57 pm by Calintz
Thank you game_guy.
I do agree with your statement. =D.

No feedback??
Anything to improve??

I was thinking of adding a tree, but I'm scared, Lol.
I know this battleback is good the way it is you know. It needs no new modifications to look good in-game, but adding a tree could probably boost its overall aesthetic appeal ...

Starrodkirby86

That version does nicely standing alone, but perhaps the grass can be of more variety?  :huh: Really though, there isn't much else to do with this art piece.

The ground actually doesn't look flat on the...ground, shall we say. xD Oh well.

Nice. :up:

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Calintz

January 11, 2010, 12:06:39 am #13 Last Edit: January 13, 2010, 02:24:02 am by Calintz
Lol, Thanks.

Edit:
Version 2.3 is up.
I attacked the problem mentioned by Starrod. I don't know if I did well to create depth or not, but I gave it my best. I do feel however, that  may have over-shaded the grass by a smidgen.. .. ..

Jackolas

the 2.3 is finally looking like something you can put in a real project. its better than I could ever do in maybe 8 years

Starrodkirby86

Oh wow, nice! I see a lot of improvement here. One of the better things in Version 2.3 is the variety of grass and the lush all around it. It makes it look definitely more...lively.

2.4 is also not bad, but there's definitely less of that varied green detail. Take it up to you if you'd like to do anything with it. :P Overdoing something might make things fall flat in the end, haha.

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G_G

In my oppinion 2.3 is better than 2.4. Its got more variety of grass and colors which kinda makes it unique. Keep up the work! :)

Calintz

Cool, cool.. .. ..
I felt like I may have overdone it, because the changes in the levels of grass was done sloppy.

I will take another go at getting some variety. Hopefully v2.5 will suffice.
Thanks guys. I will be back with an update later.

Jackolas

2.4 looks like 2.3, but than looking at it with the sun shining into your eyes
can't wait to see 2.5

(Hexamin)

that'd look great with the animated battleback script (assuming 3 more frames of grass moving in the wind and rays of sunlight comin' down wouldn't be too hard) o.O
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