RMXP Time Rift

[Blue_AWOL]

Time Rift Book One: Elderis

StoryLine

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In the future of man, the world falls to destruction after nuclear holocaust. (nothing new there eh?) Some many years after the dusts of war settle, people emerge and attempt to rebuild the world. Buildings are re-built, homes re-made, and businesses re-established. The world's governing forces however are not established. There is an order that is trying to take complete control of the world as a tyrany, and just like in all good guy/bad guy cases, there is another group trying to prevent this from happening. That's where you come in.

You are a leader of the "cause" and are on a very important mission to steal information about a new device some scientists are coming up with. However, you have no idea what said "device" is used for. So you strap on your sword; Yes there are guns in the future, but you prefer not to use them, put on your best "I'm not doing anything I'm not supposed to be doing" face and head out. Your friends Kitana and Jager are supposed to meet you there with the skinny.

All is going according to plan until of course, it doesn't. (Queue dramatic music) A cloaked man shows up and wipes out the scientists. *Gasp* Naturally you try to save the day, but much to your dismay, he kicks your a**. So instead you think you'll follow him back to where he came from so that you can find a way to avenge your friends there. Wrong again. You wind up four dimensions to the left and two thousand years in the past. And so begins: Time Rift Book One: Elderis

Characters

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 Heroes

Name: "user defined"
Race: Human
Age: 25
Height: 5'11
Weight: 185 lbs
Origin: Formerly USA
Bio: Unknown

Name: James "Jager" Steinvol
Race: Human
Age: 23
Height: 5'10
Weight: 176 lbs
Origin: Formerly Austria
Bio: A devoted participant of "T.F.A.W.D." As a soldier for the cause he helps with brute infiltration. A very loyal friend and major asset to the cause.

Name: Kitana "Kit" Kuzentsov
Race: Human
Age: 20
Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 lbs
Origin: Russia
Bio: A devoted participant of "T.F.A.W.D." As a tech-savy gunner, she is responsible for intelligent infiltration and forgery. A modern day rogue, she is very adept at "mind war".

Name:Thames
Race: Human
Age 23
Height: 5'8
Weight 170 lbs
Origin: Gobblestone
Bio: Thames seems to be a pretty knowledgable rogue and good friend. He probably has a few tricks up his sleeves, but is loyal.

Name: Klien
Race: Human
Age: 70-100?
Height: 6'0
Weight: 145 lbs
Origin: Unknown
Bio: Klien is an old wizard who spends his time tending to his books in the library in Sloane city. No one knows where klien comes from or how powerful of a wizard he really is.

Name: Sonja
Race: Elf
Age: 82
ght: 5'6
Weight: 120 lbs
Origin: Arowenth Forest
Bio: Sonja is the daughter of the King of the Arowenth Clan. She is next in line for the trone once the crown is passed down to her.

Screen Shots

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Demo Book One

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Coming Soon (Like within 24 hours soon!)

[G_G]

I recommended reformatting your project thread. It sounds interesting right now but people aren't gonna wanna read a sloppy posted thread.

Try centering the title text.
Use [hr] tags to seperate title, story, characters, screenshots, and demo.
Increase the size and center Story, Characters, Screenshots, and Demo

[WhiteRose]

Looks fairly interesting. Like G_G said, you'll get a bit more attention if you clean up your post a bit. Here's an example of a well-done Project topic: http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,31.0.html

[Blue_AWOL]

thanks for the hint, the box in which you write everything was pissing me off though so I was just trying to get it done. It wouldn't let me stay focused on what I was doing because the d*** thing kept jumping around. Granted it's working now, I'll try to clean it up a bit.