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Started by cyclope, February 01, 2011, 06:26:43 pm

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cyclope

February 01, 2011, 06:26:43 pm
Resources Improvment Thread

Introduction
Not sure if your work is good enough or you want to share some of your work? Well, post it here to know what others think of it.

What can you post?

Every kind of resource; music, titles, gameovers, characters, ext...

Things I Hate

1. People who point at their wrist asking for the time... I know where my watch is pal, where the hell is yours? Do I point at my crotch when I ask where the toilet is?

2. People who are willing to get off their a** to search the entire room for the TV remote because they refuse to walk to the TV and change the channel manually.

3. When people say "Oh you just want to have your cake and eat it too". Damn Right! What good is cake if you can't eat it?

4. When people say "it's always the last place you look". Of course it is. Why the hell would you keep looking after you've found it? Do people do this? Who and where are they?

5. When people say while watching a film, "did ya see that?" No Loser, I paid $12 to come to the cinema and stare at the damn floor!

6. People who ask "Can I ask you a question?"... Didn't give me a choice there, did ya sunshine?

cyclope

February 02, 2011, 09:47:25 pm #1


Idk if this is okay for an rpg title :wacko:
Things I Hate

1. People who point at their wrist asking for the time... I know where my watch is pal, where the hell is yours? Do I point at my crotch when I ask where the toilet is?

2. People who are willing to get off their a** to search the entire room for the TV remote because they refuse to walk to the TV and change the channel manually.

3. When people say "Oh you just want to have your cake and eat it too". Damn Right! What good is cake if you can't eat it?

4. When people say "it's always the last place you look". Of course it is. Why the hell would you keep looking after you've found it? Do people do this? Who and where are they?

5. When people say while watching a film, "did ya see that?" No Loser, I paid $12 to come to the cinema and stare at the damn floor!

6. People who ask "Can I ask you a question?"... Didn't give me a choice there, did ya sunshine?

Starrodkirby86

February 03, 2011, 01:38:40 am #2
Time to get the ball rolling here, huh~?

It's definitely minimalist. I'd have to say that the logo, or the title text, definitely doesn't fit. You should probably try something unique and tailored to your game in general. Right now its location and appearance makes it stick out like a sore thumb. That's my thought, really.

I'll wait a small moment before I do anything like a sticky. o:

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winkio

February 03, 2011, 01:42:34 am #3
This thread is the definition of redundancy.

The title text could definitely use some outline and other effects to make it pop.  Also, I don't know what it is with people and overly dark title screens, but it ends up looking like a dark amorphous blur.  Either add more objects, or bring the face and hood closer to the center and make it bigger.

The Niche

February 03, 2011, 03:27:19 pm #4
Alternatively, try getting rid of the hood, so the face appears to be coming out of the background.
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DeXuS

February 04, 2011, 12:45:40 am #5
Agreed, and make the blood more...  Vibrant!!!  Make it stand out.  Make it look real...  Or just use real blood.
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