Oh hey, look who can take criticism.
Let me go more in-depth for you:
1. The animation is boring, because, well, it barely has any frames and only one character is animated.
2. The wings are unshaded and ugly and do not go well with the rest of the image at all.
3. The text is ugly, and is a little hard to read.
4. If you have something else negative to say towards me, or anyone else that comments, why did you post it here, and ask people to comment?
I hope my explanation did not hurt your head.