Extremely Short Preview- Spouse Rage (even the name sounds weird)

[EZ Destroyer]

yeah. i dont wanna make games with legends or mythic tales and you'll unveil the truth as u advance. IT'S TOO COMMON!!!

WHAT IT'S ABOUT?

    so, i came up with a silly 'gag' game about 2 spouses who got really fed up with each other. Long story short, they have an epic battle with each other, THE END.(this is a stupid story)

See, not too long right?(pssss.......actually the storyline is not yet fully made.......it's our secret ok?)

ok, i just made 3 maps so far but i post this 4 people 2 give some opinion on the battle system. is it too hard? too easy? too common? too repetitive? just right? etc.. etc.. etc..(spamming) TEEEEEEET TEEEET(flaming which got sensored)

Preview length: Probably less than 30 minutes. well, 80 hours if u keep losing.

SCREENSHOTS:

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actually, there's supposed 2 be a nice shade at the edge of the screen but i skipped all those when i use test play to ge a snapshot.the shade looks like the next picture. can u see it?

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weird? why does a BABS game have side view? 8th Wonder of the world!!!! 9th wonder will be a guy who can twist his body so that his nose will touch his butthole

whatever, i'm pretty sure u dont wanna hear me babbling and cause every1 labor pain and prematured babies. so, the link:

http://www.mediafire.com/?p9bfgo4ttttgtmu

pls give comments, criticizing, suggestions and i dont mind flaming if it's 4 my game.(moderators, ps allow flaming)FLAME ME!!!MUHAHAHAHA(that'll just add my motivation)

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BEWARE!!!!THE MAIN CHARACTER IS A GIANT GOBLIN AND A FROG!!!!! THEIR ARCHNEMESIS IS A PTERODACTYL AND A LAME DEVIL

[EZ Destroyer]

uhhh, any1?

[G_G]

Not to sound harsh or anything be you're kind of getting on my nerves. ._.

Honestly, you can't expect someone to come and read your project topic when it looks like that. Its almost comparable to the shit from a fly who's constantly flying around shit. When I look at project topics, and I immediately see bad grammar, bad topic layout, I'm going to close it right away. A good project topic has a good layout, images, info, story, characters. If you are honestly looking to get any feedback, edit your topic.

[WhiteRose]

Echoing G_G in some respects, I agree that you would get more feedback if you added more to your topic in order to garner additional interest. Screenshots and a little more information about gameplay would work wonders in intriguing people into downloading your preview and giving it a try. Just my two cents.

[EZ Destroyer]

have you tried? ok ok. i'll try putting down some screenshots

[Ryex]

not just screen shots friend. you need to organize your project and my it look appealing and professional.
Use this topic as a guide
http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,2404.0.html

if you can't be bothered to present you work to us in an appealing manner I can't be bothered to read it. it's that simple.

[EZ Destroyer]

yeah! but this preview isn't even 30 minutes long. i'm focusing on the battle system not much on the legends and mythical tales blah blah. this is just temporary. i don't have much time focusing on this thread. pls try it and give criticism on the battle system and all the rest. anyway, thanks 4 the link. i'll bookmark it 4 future references. it's a really small preview! not even 30 minutes! pls try it out and give some criticism on the battles. Too easy? Too hard? Too boring? Too predictable? Lame music? Nice music? Just the right difficulty? i don't go online very often so i don't have much time on this and i just need some opinions. many lv up 4 any1 who give opinions.

[G_G]

The game doesn't have to be 30 minutes long, but the topic should look neat. Research has shown that people decide whether to stay on a web page within the first second, if they see crap they aren't gonna stay.