Quote from: Curly Brace (SRK86) on May 27, 2009, 07:07:48 pm
Dragon X:
Your map is reminiscent of many newbies' RMXP things. A few things I have to comment on:
- Your map is terribly square. Many towns are definitely not that linear or 'cookie-cutter'. It's not like the people who founded the town went, "Hey, this is all flat land! We can build it perfectly!" No, the location of it probably has all sorts of terrain that the builders would have to go around.
- The houses are dull. They're nearly the exact same thing. I don't have the tileset readily available with me, but I'm sure you can add more of a shape with it. Again, not all houses are just xx rows at something like that...I suppose. And all of them don't need the same stuff...(Unless this is a Communist town...)
- You have an interesting design on some areas at least. Good for you on that...Just think what creative areas you can put so it'll be spiced up.
- Many newbie maps are terribly empty. In the real world, space isn't something that is so available, especially in bustling areas. Don't make them so largely empty.
- This is just a minor thing, but I don't think the dark stone tile is used for that. Doesn't matter though...I guess.
Keep working on it though~I find it easier to actually just map or diagram some basic thing out and go for it...If I ever go back on the editor...It's a little bit difficult when you have the stuff down and there's some maps you have to mangle and manage through.
Yeah I know that was a very early map though I never ever finished the town, when making part of the world map its intently cluttered with random trees and plants and animals wandering around, so much so I had to install the anti lag script D: it also has random cliff formations and stuff and was my best map. That map I showed was like the 3rd map I made when making the game and I'm gonna improve it, also it doesn't show the crowds of people events that I added in later on.

I find it easier to actually just map or diagram some basic thing out and go for it...If I ever go back on the editor...It's a little bit difficult when you have the stuff down and there's some maps you have to mangle and manage through.