beginning intro help

[nathmatt]

what do u think if my intro so far besides the graphics

http://www.savefile.com/files/2055972

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=5O0N6D46

[Hellfire Dragon]

I couldn't download it... the page was full of ads and pop ups, and when the download page was finished loading nothing happened... tried again still nothing. Also you should something that doesn't have so many ads

[nathmatt]

aded megaupload

[Hellfire Dragon]

Well here's what I found, I kept notepad open like I usually do, and took noted

• "In the year 1947 a UFO crashed in roswell, or so we though" <thought mis-spelled
  
• Grass area when ship is moving at start, goes on for a little too long
  
• 'sand' area (really bright yellow) too bright
  
• Ship stops in green area and nothing happens
  

I can't say anything else really since it stopped when the ship got to the top of the screen in the green area. Aside from that, it kinda goes on too long, the ship going over the terrain, ya know?

[nathmatt]

well will fix the grammar the i played it & i didn't see any where  on  the ship it got stuck but i have it flying over my world map y will be explained l8er in game but i did find few errors so will fix those & re upload it & the yellow is a tint to make it look old guess its not working should i use a grey tint or no tint any suggestion on that


edit re uploaded press shift to skip the ship part for now until the world map is more than just terrain