[Mike] REQUEST CHARACTER SPRITES HERE!

Started by Lopom, October 31, 2009, 02:47:12 pm

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Subsonic_Noise

Quote from: Lopom on November 01, 2009, 01:10:25 pm
OK, this is the best i could do i want to know if you think this is good enough Sub.

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open it in paint or summit.

Sorry it couldn't be better, i honestly have never done this before ;p

Well, it's good for the first draft, but there are some things to criticize:
- The placement of the eyes looks wierd, but i have no clue how to fix that.
- the hair also looks a bit strange, too xD
- could you make the coat a bit longer? Not as long as the ones in matrix (lol), but still, perhaps 3-5   
  pixels?
Then it just needs some more shading and details and it'll be awesome xD



Lopom

all the things you said were the things i thought looked bad, i originally had the coat like a trench coat, but decided you wanted to be able to see the belt, so i raised it to see the belt, i agree ill give it another shot, it's real hard for me, but practise makes perfect, how do you want the eye?

Subsonic_Noise

Quote from: Lopom on November 01, 2009, 01:51:36 pm
all the things you said were the things i thought looked bad, i originally had the coat like a trench coat, but decided you wanted to be able to see the belt, so i raised it to see the belt, i agree ill give it another shot, it's real hard for me, but practise makes perfect, how do you want the eye?

I actually have no clue how the eye should be, lol. Just leave them as they are if you can't find a position that looks better.
But, thanks so far^^

Lopom

Sorry double post, but here is the newest one i added more shading lowered the jacket by 2 or three pixels, hopefully sorted hair and eyes:

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Subsonic_Noise

Quote from: Lopom on November 01, 2009, 02:20:36 pm
hopefully sorted hair and eyes

You absolutely did! It looks awesome so far. Just some parts look a bit pillow shaded, and the mouth kinda has a strange color, but these are things that can be fixed^^
thanks^^

Orici

hey, I like your sprites and I have a request for you:

Sex:
Male

Description:
-RTP like
-blond and long hair
-wears a black/dark brown long coat and some armor
-maybe, with sword on his back

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Background:
The game is settled in a steampunk period. This guy is obsessed with machines and rules a big empire.
He is the main villian of the story.

Lopom

Quote from: Subsonic_Noise on November 01, 2009, 02:37:00 pm
Quote from: Lopom on November 01, 2009, 02:20:36 pm
hopefully sorted hair and eyes

You absolutely did! It looks awesome so far. Just some parts look a bit pillow shaded, and the mouth kinda has a strange color, but these are things that can be fixed^^
thanks^^


indeed it was just to represent where the mouth would go, pillow shading meaning box shades right?

@Orici, ofcourse, ill see what i can come up with, if not tonight then i will tommorrow.

Subsonic_Noise


Lopom

Done your sprite Orici. :) how does it look to you?

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Didn't add a sword just incase you wanted to equip different ones. how is it?

Orici

It looks great but the face looks likes he's too young in my opinion.Can you make it look older?

Lopom

ofcourse i can. ill have it done later, i have to go to work. :)