My First Character And My Job ( Fireman ) New Edit

[fireman199]

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Face


Character in black


Battler



Credit Character : backdraft ( Fireman199 )
Credit Face And Battler : ???? I'm Sorry. I don't Know.

[G_G]

Shape is pretty good. If you can I recommend shading the actual suit instead of using just one color for the orange, red, gray, and yellow.
Then it would look decent.

Its pretty good but shading would definetly help.

[Jackolas]

first of all.. its better than i ever will be able to make 1, so congrats on that

Second, There are 2 things I think you can improve on.
the first is indeed shading. it will give the character a little more depth and less like a flat stamp
the second is to give the emblem on the helm a little more colour. atm its hardly seen and can be mistaken as a part of the face.

[fireman199]

New Edit 29 01 2010