Started by WhiteRose, June 11, 2014, 09:38:30 pm
Quote from: winkio on June 16, 2014, 01:13:55 amI ended up spending a lot of time playing smash and working on Vault this weekend, so I only got through Chapter 7. I've been writing a little less as your writing has improved, but I'm still up to 8.75 pages of feedback for 77 pages read. I'll keep at it during the week. It's definitely been a fun read so far!
Quote from: winkio on June 16, 2014, 08:14:19 pmAlright, I sent you what I had so far, since it's not really productive for you to sit around and wait for me to finish the whole thing. I wrote it all as I read it, and didn't go back and change things, so there are a few stream-of-thought type things and guesses about plot, which are just to help you get a feel for where my head was at as a reader. Let me know if you have any questions.
Quote from: locowhiteknight on June 17, 2014, 09:36:14 pmI'll try to read this when I get a chance. I know how difficult it can be sometimes to get feedback NIP. I'm not sure if you already know about fantasywriters.org, but if you're not a member I would highly recommend joining that site. They have a very welcoming community where you can review each others stories. They also hold monthly writing contests where members are challenged to create a short story that fits certain criteria.
Quote from: winkio on June 18, 2014, 03:00:27 amI read chapter 8, but I'm going to wait until I finish a few more until I send you the next updateEDIT: finished 9 and 10 as well. I'll probably send the next batch of comments tomorrow night.
Quote from: ArcaneAlchemy on June 29, 2014, 10:25:13 amI'd be willing to read it as well if you'd like another pair of eyes.
Quote from: winkio on July 05, 2014, 12:21:48 amFinished the entire thing and sent you the full feedback
Quote from: WhiteRose on July 05, 2014, 01:04:41 amI'll definitely keep you informed as I make revisions and finish writing the story.