House On Haunted Hill criticism

[nathmatt]

ok i want to see want you think if my Title, Logo & Game Over

Title tileset made by zanyzora

Title script is a little modded version of mogs

Text generated from http://projects.ericshalov.com/text/

demo: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CDE0WAMC

edit : forgot to change the Game Over lol

edit no thoughts at all ?

[RoseSkye]

A. Pretty neat.
B. How is this a re: ?
C. You didnt need help, you needed criticism.

[nathmatt]

thats what i meant but i was just going to use this for any help on it

any suggestions on it

[nathmatt]

i still need music & a bathroom tileset if you know where i can find any would appreciate it credited 1s

[Starrodkirby86]

What kind of music do you need? .mid, .mp3, etc, and what sort of music do you want, yeah, like ominous, ghastly, etc. etc.?

Just here for specifications of such.

Logo/Splash Screen: Nice and interesting to have. Try realigning it towards the center though.
Title Screen: It's really nice eerie wise and all, though it seems a bit choppy with the lightning (At how they're only two images just going back and forth). The text can also use a bit smoothening out. The red border looks somewhat unprofessional on the text.

Lolwut @ actual gameplay

I guess Arshes wets the bed and we get a Game Over from that.

Overall, it seems pretty interesting at what you're putting it. It actually has potential to be a bit spooky.

[nathmatt]

i will work on that thanx and creapy/horror music

[nathmatt]

ok here my my first map added custom fog what do you think i could put this in the mapping thread but made this 1 might as well use it by the way i removed the dark pick just made it stay the white right now looks better on the title
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[Subsonic_Noise]

ok here my my first map added custom fog what do you think i could put this in the mapping thread but made this 1 might as well use it by the way i removed the dark pick just made it stay the white right now looks better on the title
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I like it, just reduce the colour saturation and get rid of Arshes and it will be really creepy^^

[nathmatt]

lol Arshes is just tell i figure out which 1i want to use and will work on saturation um just to make sure you mean lighter right ?

[Subsonic_Noise]

lol Arshes is just tell i figure out which 1i want to use and will work on saturation um just to make sure you mean lighter right ?

No, in RMXP it is called "Grey", but it's actually the saturation. Just try it. I use 170 in my game, but that would probably be too much for yours. 255 is black and white.

[nathmatt]

oh you mean mess with in game tint lol didn't think of that
k how this its 150

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[Subsonic_Noise]

oh you mean mess with in game tint lol didn't think of that
k how this its 150

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Muuuuuch better!^^ And you also tried to hide Arshes.
Try messing around with it until you find something perfect, you might even try to add a colour, perhaps some blue? You can set the screen tint in a common event that is called at the start of te game, at least that's what I made.

[nathmatt]

lol could be any1 with brown hair

edit: can spam my own thread lol

edit2: ok uploaded a Demo Arshes is still in there right now this is just a map demo a few events but none of them or story line 1s

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http://www.sendspace.com/file/015d3y

Edit: any thoughts any1

[Subsonic_Noise]

lol could be any1 with brown hair

edit: can spam my own thread lol

edit2: ok uploaded a Demo Arshes is still in there right now this is just a map demo a few events but none of them or story line 1s

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http://www.sendspace.com/file/015d3y

Edit: any thoughts any1

Not bad so far, has much potential, I don't like the title screen and the music though. These are not really scary. I could help you with one of them, or both, if you want.

[nathmatt]

sure i just that music because it was alright couldn't find anything free to use
and the title sure it didn't take long for me to make so i am not really worried about scraping it
also any suggestion on the menu if u noticed i removed everything but item save & end game but looks bland any suggestions on that

[Subsonic_Noise]

1. After closing the  menu and opening it again, the game crashes.
2. If I save and go back to the menu, end game suddenly is the first thing in the menu, followed by two blank menu points o.O
3. The concept is good, but I would consider using a background graphic instead of the window skin, or making it transparent.

[nathmatt]

ok i found a wallpaper maker online & found this char i like what do you think

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website http://www.wallpapermaker.net/tool

or this for a title

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website free4allcity.com
website for text : www.brandsoftheworld.com/.../2000/12/19464.html

Ok i edited a sprite picture of him what do you think

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only problem if i use don't know who to credit

[Blizzard]

That's Lelouch la Britania from the anime called Code Geass.

[nathmatt]

so what do you think

[Blizzard]

Hm... it's not that resembling.

[fugibo]

Hm... it's not that resembling.

For posterity, that's not really the best English. We have to use crap like "Hmm... it doesn't resemble it that much," because, for whatever reason, that particular verb doesn't form a participle (a verb that acts like an adjective).