Quote from: RoseSkye on December 20, 2009, 04:34:17 am
Quote from: Diokatsu on December 16, 2009, 08:03:54 pm
Quote from: Ryexander on December 16, 2009, 07:21:15 pm
So today at school we were supposed to have a bomb threat evac drill.
And guess what happened: two minuets before the drill was suppose to happen an announcement came on the loudspeaker about the drill being canceled and also said that we were going into a soft lock-down (all the teacher close the doors and no one is allowed to leave but class goes on as normal). Then five minutes latter the announcements came on again and we continued with the bomb evac drill as planned...or so we thought... When we arrived at our designated evac point (a building 500 yards away), we were informed that there had been a REAL bomb threat delivered to the police at 9:58 am (about 20 minuets before the present time of the story). The bomb threat encompassed our school, the middle school five blocks away, the local collage, and the court house. We were then kept in that gym-sized room, for the rest of the day (until 3:40 pm) at which time we could go home. When red cross disaster relief people showed up, we were given watter bottles and a piece of pizza form Pizza Hut or Domino's for lunch; my piece would of satisfied a three year old child. Oh and I was forced to leave all my stuff in the room as is standard for evac drills so I was locked in a room with 1500 other people and a deck of cards some one had in their pocket for entertainment for about 5 and a half hours.
I start to question how prepared our town really is for disasters because, while they gave the appearance of having everything under control, you could tell that it was real chaos outside that gym we were stuck in...
I pity the fool who made the threats; actually I don't. He will get what he deserves.
I love the irony of getting a bomb threat on the same day we were having a bomb drill.
You have atrocious writing. I corrected it in respect to grammar and spelling for the sake of everyone else, but thoroughly review the organization of the ideas; those questions are basically strings of useless and opinionated info.
To address your story now, I don't mind missing school so why are you complaining. XD
...no you didn't I didn't even read it and I can tell just by looking at it that you actually INSERTED errors.
You don't capitalize a in and at the beginning of the sentence.. or even start it off as a sentence.
So, today at school, we were supposed to have a bomb threat evacuation drill, and guess what happened? Two minutes before the drill was supposed to happen, an announcement came on the loudspeaker saying that the drill was being canceled and that we were going into a soft lock-down (all the teachers close their doors and no one is allowed to leave, but class goes on as normal). Then, five minutes later, the loudspeaker came on again and announced that we were continuing with the bomb evacuation drill as planned, or so we thought. When we arrived at our designated evacuation point (a building 500 yards away), we were informed that there had been a
real bomb threat delivered to the police at 9:58 AM (it was around 10:20 AM at the time). The bomb threat was directed at our school, the middle school five blocks away, the local collage, and the court house. We were then kept in the bomb building, basically a gym-sized room, for the rest of the day, which ended at 3:40 PM, at which time we could go home. When the Red Cross Disaster Relief people showed up, we were given watter bottles and a piece of pizza from Pizza Hut or Domino's for lunch; my piece would have satisfied a three-year-old child, I believe. Oh, I was also forced to leave all my stuff in the room (as is standard for evacuation drills,) so I was locked in a room for about 5 and a half hours with 1500 other people and a deck of cards for entertainment that someone had in their pocket.
I start to question how prepared our town really is for disasters since, while they gave the appearance of having everything under control, you could tell that it was real chaos outside the gym we were stuck in.
I pity the fool who made the threats; actually, I don't. He will get what he deserves.
I love the irony of getting a bomb threat on the same day we were scheduled to have a bomb drill.
There, that better, Rosey-poo?