D:
-Why is there a Quotes section? Moreso, why does it hold such meaningless quotes?
-Horrid engrish makes the Story (and most of the post) near unreadable. Not to mention that from what I understand there are no unique plot points within it.
-Why do you have Race: Human if all (or rather both, ew only two characters) of them are human? Redundant?
-If I put a compelling scene in my game about a character dying or a government takeover of Forest Town I wouldn't call it a feature. So why is "door scene from Resident Evil" listed under features, or listed at all? Also is this an RE fangame? I haven't read all of the thread but if this is put it in the first post.
-S.A.G. (Stupid Acronyms Go!) Please, please don't do stuff like L.E.M.E.S. because it seems king of L.A.M.E.
So once again, D: